Who am I

Who am I?

WALT: to plan and write a recount from our class experience

Key things to remember:

• Past tense - we are writing about something that has already happened
• Chronological order - write it in the order that you completed the experience in
• Use who, what, why, when, where and how
• Talk about how you felt during this situation add emotion
• Don’t just tell the reader what you did show them through your use of language features.
• CHECK spelling and grammar and PROOFREAD

Introduction: Hook the reader, What is your recount about Use the 5 W’s

On Tuesday in the morning we played who am I in reading. My partner is Punaiaru she is my best best friend and I was Hulk and she was Jasmine from Aladdin I guest who I was in one go Punaiaru did’nt know her one cause she couldn't` see it i told her that her one was Jasmine from aladdin.

Body 1: This body of text will be focusing on the instructions you were given by your teacher. What were you thinking and how were you feeling when the teacher was explaining what the challenge was?

When Miss Parrant was talking it sounded easy but it was actually hard. While she was talking I felt so nervous but I knew I could do it. The day after yesterday we played the game again I was a fish I knew it because a saw the F at the beginning.

Body 2: This section will be based on the what you were thinking and feeling when you were asking the questions of who you were OR when you were being asked questions (Whichever one came FIRST for YOU)

I felt normal because the game was easy a tiny bit when we were playing I knew who I was in like a minute. I wish we can play it everyday it's pretty cool and fun. But my sister doesn't play with me cause she cheats, and because we will fight and aque.

Body 3: This section will be based on the what you were thinking and feeling when you were asking the questions of who you were OR when you were being asked questions (Whichever one came SECOND for YOU)

When I was trying to tell my mates one I couldn't explain it properly because I said it’s a girl that fly on a flying mat but punaiaru still didn't get it. So i gave her more information but she still didn't get it so I told her the name.

Conclusion  This section will be based on what you learned from your experience. What would you do it differently if you did it again?

If i did it again the I would do it in a different way by not using paper because you can see through it so I decided that i will just use pen because you can’t see it if it's on your head.

Paste your full recount here from your plan:

On Tuesday in the morning we played who am I in reading. My partner was Punaiaru she is my best best friend and I was Hulk.She was Jasmine from aladdin I guessed who I was in one go  Punaiaru didn’t know her one because she couldn't see it I told her that her one was Jasmine from aladdin. When Miss Parrant was talking it sounded easy but it was actually hard. While she was talking I felt so nervous but I knew I could do it. The day after yesterday we played the game again i was a fish I knew it because a saw the f at the beginning.

I felt normal because the game was easy a tiny bit when we were playing I knew who I was in like a minute. I wish we can play it everyday it's pretty cool and fun. But my sister doesn't play with me cause she cheats, and because we will fight and aque. When i was trying to tell my mates one I couldn't explain it properly because i said it’s a girl that fly on a flying mat but punaiaru still didn't get it. So I gave her more information but she still didn't get it so i told her the name. If I did it again the I would do it in a different way by not using paper because you can see through it so I decided that I will just use pen because you can’t see it if it's on your head.