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Greeting: What do you want to welcome with? Kia ora, Talofa...	Greetings, Talofa Lava, malo, kia ora.
Who are you? Name/ Year/ Teachers	My name is Daniella, I’m a year 6 at Pt england school in romm 7, my teacher is Mr goodwin.
Interests I enjoy, I like, My favourite	I like to eat chicken nuggets,I also like eating KFC, MCDONALD, and fish and chips.
Sports/ Hobbies I play, On the weekend,	I enjoy playing basketball with my brothers at home, On the weekends me and my brother Rickee goes to the pools, he always goes to the gym in the pools and I am always swimming.
Other Anything else?	My favorite TV shows are Nicky, Ricky, Dicky, And Dawn, Teen Titans, And Ravens Home.

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Greetings, My name is Daniella, I’m a year 6 at Pt england school in room 7, my teacher is Mr goodwin. I like to eat chicken nuggets,I also like eating KFC, MCDONALD, and fish and chips.I enjoy playing basketball with my brothers at home, On the weekends me and my brother Rickee goes to the pools, he always goes to the gym in the pools and I am always swimming. .My favorite TV shows is Nicky, Ricky, Dicky, And Dawn, Teen Titans, Ravens Home, And Vines.

Kelsey and the 3 bears

So the hunters were having breakfast but it was too hot so oldest hunter which was Bob said let’s go to wait and go for a walk in the forest. Then their came a girl named Kelsey, she was told to get some berries and also told not to go far. While she was getting them she didn't know her way and asked herself “where am I?” So then she saw a house and she knocked but no one was there, so she opened the the door and saw some chicken to eat. She walked and tried the big bowl it was too hot, so she tried the medium bowl it was to cold, so she tried the small one and she ate it all and said that was delicious. She went to the living room and tried the big seat, it was to hard, she tried the large one it was to soft, so then she tried the little one it was perfect but she broke it. After that she walked to the bedroom, she tried the big bed, it was to hard and she couldn't get on it, she tried the large one it was to soft, so she tried the little one and she broke it and tried to put it back together.She walked into a beautiful clean room,she tried the big bed it was way to hard, so she tried the large one it was to soft, s then she tried the lucky last and it was perfect so she fell fast asleep just like sleeping beauty. Then the 3 hunters came and the oldest hunter named Bob said who ate my jelly, second hunter said who ate mine, little hunter said who ate mine and sadly cried. So they walked to the living room and Bob said who sat on my chair, then the other one sam said who sat on my chair, then the little one calais said someone broke my chair and calais cried. So they walked into the room,the oldest said who slept in my bed, second said who slept in my bed, then little one said who is she, and kelsey waked up and ran and jumped out from the window and she didn't stop until she found her home and she told her mum sorry for being late I saw some hunters. But she did not know that they would not harm her all she needed to say is sorry.

In the holidays

In the holidays me my mum my sister and brother are going to cash converters for a new Xbox 4 for my brother cause the broke cause he punched it when he was angry.


After we did that we will be going to Pak’n’save it was a hot day that day oh and it was on Friday after school it will be an exceptional day because we saw a nice Maori women I don't know her name but my mum does she’s a pretty cool lady.

After that we will go to Panmure at the bike barn to buy a bike from and my sister it was pink and purple then we had something very yummy it was chicken nibbles it was are very gigantic day.

Comic strip.

we used Onomatopoeia.

What is love.

Here is what i really want in the  world.

On my awesome weekend.

On the weekends it was my sister’s birthday. We were playing games on my other sister’s phone.

The games that we played was zombies vs plants and hand games.

That time my sister was making a banana cake with milky chocolate for the flavor so it has taste and she used milk with it so it feels smooth.

Now on Tuesday my sister is going to the movie’s.

Once upon a time.

Once upon a time there was two big bunny’s and they was a nice and friendly dinosaur and three men they were friends and shared the same house together they were loving creatures and humans they always shared their yum yum's together.

When they were sleeping something very strange happened. The strange thing was a gruffalo the humans and the creatures went outside together and they said what long claws you got, what big purple spikes you got and look how big teeth you got and look how big eyes you got. Then they started to scream as loud as they have ever screamed they were horrified from the scary creature but they didn't realised that it was actually nice just like them.

This is my favorite part. Do you want to know how they knew that the gruffalo was good they apologised to the gruffalo then the gruffalo became like family with the creatures and the humans.

If I had a Island to myself.

If i had a Island all to myself as long as i want i'll make only on single rule and that is your not allowed to make a mess like throwing things around. In Opotiki there they had no rules I dont know what its called and if someones tired they can sleep in a tent with there sleeping bags but if it's raining it would be canceled. if you need to go toilet go up the hill dig and then there's the toilet. And you can cook the food with the fire or go haunting or fishing.

Water Polo

Hiwi the Kiwi.

Yesterday we saw Hiwi the Kiwi and we learnt this song that goes like this Kai Moana food from the Sea Kaimoana to feed the family fish all around and there would always be Kaimoana For you and me. Hiwi the Kiwi came on thursday before lunch started. It was cool to know about them they must have a cool life living in a caravan near a beach and go fishing every single day.

Cross Country

Cross country started on friday at Pt England primary we ran in the school and out the school. While we were running I came 5 or 6 it was a little tiring because we ran around the school and near to the beach but we have  to keep in the white line we ran 1 kilometre. I came before Inga Faga came after me.

In the race it was a little tiring but lucky i didn't give up. Champions never give up that's what they say by the way i tried my best in cross country. In cross country my house colour is blue it’s named HineMoana.

By the way i felt like a champion because I tried.

In the photo of me i was running as fast as I can because that time it was Cross Country. In the top left photo I really loved it because it is so cool because one person was running and her name was Leilani and there was another one and  she was walking and her name is Brooklyn.

Never give up

I am Derek Redmond. I am from Britain. My first run was in 1992. I feel very excited.I ran 400 meters it is awesome being famous.

He was fast in the race and i’m sure he feels excited.

Dad helps Derek to the finish line while Derek’s hopping and the dad walking.

Katinka Hosszu

My name is Katinka Hosszu and i am from Hungary. I am the fastest swimmer. I have brown hair, and I am strong, i have brown eyes and my skin colour is whitish. When i go swimming i need goggles,and cap. At swimming I got a gold medal i was so excited and happy. My coach is my husband he get so excited when races he act’s crazy like high.

Before i started the race i was feeling nervous thought i was going to drown or lose. While i was racing i was so excited because i keep going on without looking anywhere else.

When i heard myself on the world's record stuff i was just proud of myself and proud when i won the gold medal. my time was 4 minutes and 26 seconds.

Coldplay

The Coldplay is there band. We saw the Harbour Brige. and the kids running to earth.

I saw a swimming turtle and the children running to earth, and i saw the city upside up and water upside down like opposite. I also saw New Zealand, and outer space, tunnel there is a lot of things about the video.       

My favorite part was when the kids were running to earth, and the city upside up and the sea upside down, My other favorite part is all of the video.

The amazing underwater room.

The Manta Resort underwater room is in the middle of the Ocean. The water room is in Africa.

You can see fishes and you can also see stingrays.  there is lights out side flashing at the water so you can see the kaimoana at night.

You can go swimming, you can go lie on the roof and look at the sky.  You can go diving. If i lived it would be cool and amazing the coolest thing about it is a person makes your dinner and gives it to you.

Mice

Mice look like cats because they got whiskers. Mice got sharp teeth and big ears to hear they got hair on them there is lots of thing about them.


Mice eat little bits of pieces of scrap food that people leave around. Mice eat vegetables, fruit. mice have sharp teeth to nibble hard thing like nuts and dog biscuits.
 

The rich and famous Opera House.

The Sydney Opera house is in Sydney near buildings.

At night it glows. at day it looks white and has no other colours.

7 million people go there to perform for a lot of money. People that sing Opera is getting some money they are amazing at dancing.