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Showing posts with label 2017 Room 8 literacy writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2017 Room 8 literacy writing. Show all posts

Friday, 9 February 2018

The duffy show

On the 7th of february, at Pt england school Team 5,4,3,2, and 1
went to the hall at assembly to see the duffy show.
At the duffy show they did a story about the halloween bully.
It was interesting and sad but I like how they did not give up and
apologized, they were really confident even when they did a mistake
with the blanket that they accidently broke but fixed it. it was really
fun.


First they introduced themself and told us a really sad story about this
person being bullied and had no friends.In the assembly we had three
characters which acted for a story that they told, it was the halloween
bully. The duffy assembly was about things that shouldn't happened
and things  you do like you should always apologize because when
you grow up you would be really sad for what you did. My favorite
part was when Molly apologizes to Frankie and they become real
good amazing beautiful friends. The main thing about the story is
that they take care of each other. I learnt that to never be a bully
even if you think it’s funny and that if your a bully, you should
always apologize.

At the assembly I thought it was really funny and sad, because the
skeleton was funny, but the bully was sad.

Wednesday, 23 August 2017

My journey in space


Walt: create a journal about your time in spaceWalt: use use creative language to express your experiences 

Tuesday, 15 August 2017

Neil Armstrong

This is Neil Armstrong he is one of the first persons on the Moon, he got there with Michael Collins and Edwin Aldrin, the three boys including Neil got to the Moon with a rocketship, they got there at 20th July 1969 in the morning.
People say he only put the USA flag on the moon to represent his country and his family. He is very famous now that he is the first person on the moon. The photo up the top is Neil Armstrong getting ready to go to the moon.


TITLE: WHO WAS THE FIRST PERSON ON THE MOON.


Author: Daniella H.S

Walt: create a newspaper article Walt: use correct language for a newspaper article






Friday, 16 June 2017

Can he save her?

One friday night supergirl went for a little walk because she felt like she needed time out away from her house. While she was walking a green gobbler came out of nowhere and tried to kidnap her. The green gobbler was told to do this by his master batman. As he was doing this along came spiderman and superman.

Spiderman and superman chased after the villain but he was very fast. Spiderman yelled “You go left I will go right” to superman. They thought it was going to be easy but there was more than 1 gobbler, there was about 9 of them. They took supergirl up high on a building and pushed her off. It looked like she was going to crash to the ground but all of a sudden superman flew to her and rescued her.

Together they got supergirl because they worked as a team. Superman and spiderman captured 3 gobblers which left 6 gobblers. Superman and spiderman kept sneaking around and got more gobblers. Finally there were only 2 gobblers left superman destroyed 1 of the gobbler’s and spiderman wrapped the other gobbler in his web. Spiderman said to the gobble “if you do that again I will come after you.” So the gobbler learnt how to be good, loving and caring,


THE END

Friday, 2 June 2017

Whats for dinner

Once I was watching tv these two men came and knocked on the door. I opened it and they asked me if I can cook and I said yes, they took me to MKR and said if you want a challenge here’s your chance. They told me I have to make 3 recipes. I decided to make a beredo with letters, tomatoes and cucumber, a cake with lollies on the top of it with icing, and nacho mince with chips. While I was cooking I was feeling a bit shy but at the same time I felt excited. For my starter I decided to make a beredo to make this i needed to get all of my ingredients together. I made the beredo with Sliced tomatoes and cucumbers and bread with butter and sauce on the top. I made the cake with 2 eggs and a little bit of butter and I’ve put it in the oven for about a hour and I put it in the fridge for like 30 minutes. I made the nacho with mince with a bag of chips, nachos, and mince I mixed them together and put the nacho’s on the very top with the chips.


While I was making it he said it smells delicious and he walked and said times running out chop chop as he said he was walking around and waiting patiently. So the food was ready and I served it to the 3 people they tasted it and said that will probably be a 10% and all the others said I’m gonna give you a 10% and she was happy so she was in the finals and said I’m up for the next one and she cooked apple crumble with peaches, her second one was a 2017 cake with candles on the top, and her third one was pizza with a delicious taste in it, with cheese and sauce and then she served it since it was ready and she was so happy she won.       
She was so amazingly happy she even shouted this is my best day ever and she won a lot of cool amazed stuff.
She thanked the 2 mans and gave them a big giant hug.

That was when her happy life started too began