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Who am I

Who am I?

WALT: to plan and write a recount from our class experience

Key things to remember:

• Past tense - we are writing about something that has already happened
• Chronological order - write it in the order that you completed the experience in
• Use who, what, why, when, where and how
• Talk about how you felt during this situation add emotion
• Don’t just tell the reader what you did show them through your use of language features.
• CHECK spelling and grammar and PROOFREAD

Introduction: Hook the reader, What is your recount about Use the 5 W’s

On Tuesday in the morning we played who am I in reading. My partner is Punaiaru she is my best best friend and I was Hulk and she was Jasmine from Aladdin I guest who I was in one go Punaiaru did’nt know her one cause she couldn't` see it i told her that her one was Jasmine from aladdin.

Body 1: This body of text will be focusing on the instructions you were given by your teacher. What were you thinking and how were you feeling when the teacher was explaining what the challenge was?

When Miss Parrant was talking it sounded easy but it was actually hard. While she was talking I felt so nervous but I knew I could do it. The day after yesterday we played the game again I was a fish I knew it because a saw the F at the beginning.

Body 2: This section will be based on the what you were thinking and feeling when you were asking the questions of who you were OR when you were being asked questions (Whichever one came FIRST for YOU)

I felt normal because the game was easy a tiny bit when we were playing I knew who I was in like a minute. I wish we can play it everyday it's pretty cool and fun. But my sister doesn't play with me cause she cheats, and because we will fight and aque.

Body 3: This section will be based on the what you were thinking and feeling when you were asking the questions of who you were OR when you were being asked questions (Whichever one came SECOND for YOU)

When I was trying to tell my mates one I couldn't explain it properly because I said it’s a girl that fly on a flying mat but punaiaru still didn't get it. So i gave her more information but she still didn't get it so I told her the name.

Conclusion  This section will be based on what you learned from your experience. What would you do it differently if you did it again?

If i did it again the I would do it in a different way by not using paper because you can see through it so I decided that i will just use pen because you can’t see it if it's on your head.

Paste your full recount here from your plan:

On Tuesday in the morning we played who am I in reading. My partner was Punaiaru she is my best best friend and I was Hulk.She was Jasmine from aladdin I guessed who I was in one go  Punaiaru didn’t know her one because she couldn't see it I told her that her one was Jasmine from aladdin. When Miss Parrant was talking it sounded easy but it was actually hard. While she was talking I felt so nervous but I knew I could do it. The day after yesterday we played the game again i was a fish I knew it because a saw the f at the beginning.

I felt normal because the game was easy a tiny bit when we were playing I knew who I was in like a minute. I wish we can play it everyday it's pretty cool and fun. But my sister doesn't play with me cause she cheats, and because we will fight and aque. When i was trying to tell my mates one I couldn't explain it properly because i said it’s a girl that fly on a flying mat but punaiaru still didn't get it. So I gave her more information but she still didn't get it so i told her the name. If I did it again the I would do it in a different way by not using paper because you can see through it so I decided that I will just use pen because you can’t see it if it's on your head.

Writing test

Writing - Recount February 2016

Pt England School

                            

First Name	Pepe-Onolina
Last Name	Hohaia-Scanlan
Year	Year-5
Literacy Class	Eight
Teacher	Parrant

Element	Ideas	Structure	Organisation	Vocabulary	Sentence	Punctuation	Spelling
Rubric Score

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Planning Space:

Start Writing Here:  In the morning miss Parrant took us to the field near the park. Room 8 Literacy have to put on a blind folder to cover our eyes, Before that we have to get one partner so that we can take turns. My partner was Megan,while we were playing I found Megan..I felt her arm and it felt like The-Zins but when I heard the voice it sounded like Indiana but it was actually Megan. When we were playing I felt nervous because I thought that I might hit into something hard or I might trip. My favorite bit was when I was in because I thought that Megan was Tha- Zin and Indiana at the same time. Me and Megan calls the game Blind Man Booth. After we played the game we was going back inside to do the writing test the game was fun like I mean Amazing. I wish we can play the game again but I wish that I was’nt in first.

Pollution

About me

About me - Writing

Walt: be cybersmart

Plan

Greeting: What do you want to welcome with? Hello, Kia ora, Talofa...	Talofa lava.
Who are you? Name/ Year/ Teachers	My name is Daniella it’s 2017 there is 3 teachers but in one  whole class..and the teachers names are Mr goodwin,Miss scanlan,Miss,and parrant.
Interests I enjoy, I like, My favourite	I enjoy doing activity on my chromebook and i like my new teacher. And my favorite thing about school is learning and playing.
Sports/ Hobbies I play, On the weekend,	At home I play basketball with my big brothers. In the weekend sometimes we go shopping or we go to the movies.
Other Anything else?	And the other thing i like about school is having friends.and i am 9 years old and i am turning 10 on november 7th. And my favorite thing is to do when i grow up i would want to be a teacher cause it’s fun and my favorite colour is Blue,pink,purple,black,and all the other colours.

Check your ideas. Are they ok to share with EVERYONE in the world?

Final copy for blog

My name is Daniella it’s 2017 there is 3 teachers but in one whole class...and the teachers names are Mr Goodwin, Miss scanlan and Miss Parrant. And the other thing i like about school is having friends. I am 9 years old and i am turning 10 on november 7th. And my favorite thing is to do when i grow up i would want to be a teacher because it’s fun and my favorite colour is Blue,pink,purple,black,and all the other colours.

Year 5 and 6 Camp

Year 5/6 Camp - Writing

We are going to be writing about our camp experiences on camp.

Introduction Hook the reader in, and let them know what your writing is going to be about.

We are going to talk about what happened at camp.

Paragraph 1 What is camp. When, Where, Why. All the information. What activities did you do?

Camp is a thing that you go to at school or somewhere else, It’s like a Trip for kids and that. At Pt England School, we went camp on the 8th of march, We did it at school for fun. I was in the captains with Mr Goodwin, I was sleeping with Punaiuru, Tha-zin, and Jerreka. Everyday our friend Rozaida always visited,because she was a day camper.The activity campers was doing was kill zone with Mr J,we went to the pools everyday, and in the hall was where we got to play anything, It was my first camp,and we got to go kayaking it was cold.

Paragraph 2 Highlights. What were your favourite parts, and why?

My favorite part was going to the pools and kayaking with Mr Burt. I like it because I like swimming, I most liked the Moana Nui pools because I went down the slide,It was the best time of this year for me.

Paragraph 3 Thank you’s. Who made this happen for you? I.e. Family, School, Teacher, and Leaders etc

Thank you Mr Burt and Mr Jacobson  for making this year 5 and 6 camp for term 4. I would like to say you guys are the best in this school thank you very much.I want to say thank you teachers for the food.

Conclusion What did you learn about yourself on camp, why would you recommend that every student does this in future.

It was the best week of my life.

Paste your finished writing here

We are going to talk about what happened at camp.Camp is a thing that you go to at school or somewhere, It’s like a

Trip for kids and that. At Pt England School, we went camp on the 8th of march, We did it at school for fun. I was in the captains with Mr Goodwin, I was sleeping with Punaiuru, Tha-zin, and Jerreka. Everyday our friend Rozaida always visited,because she was a day camper.The activity campers was doing dead zone with Mr J,we went to the pools everyday, and in the hall was where we got to play anything, It was my first camp,and we got to go kayaking it was cold.My favorite part was going to the pools and kayaking with Mr Burt. I like it because I like swimming, I most liked the Moana Nui pools because I went down the slide,It was the best time of this year for me.Thank you Mr Burt and Mr J for making this year 5 and 6 camp for term 4.

I would like to say you guys are the best in this school thank you very much.I want to say thank you teachers for the food. It was the best week of my life. I hope my parents are paying for my next camp.

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