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Friday 17 March 2017

Writing test

Writing - Recount February 2016

Pt England School



                            
First Name
Pepe-Onolina
Last Name
Hohaia-Scanlan
Year
Year-5
Literacy Class
Eight
Teacher
Parrant





Element
Ideas
Structure
Organisation
Vocabulary
Sentence
Punctuation
Spelling
Rubric
Score











Planning Space:







Start Writing Here:  In the morning miss Parrant took us to the field near the park. Room 8 Literacy have to put on a blind folder to cover our eyes, Before that we have to get one partner so that we can take turns. My partner was Megan,while we were playing I found Megan..I felt her arm and it felt like The-Zins but when I heard the voice it sounded like Indiana but it was actually Megan. When we were playing I felt nervous because I thought that I might hit into something hard or I might trip. My favorite bit was when I was in because I thought that Megan was Tha- Zin and Indiana at the same time. Me and Megan calls the game Blind Man Booth. After we played the game we was going back inside to do the writing test the game was fun like I mean Amazing. I wish we can play the game again but I wish that I was’nt in first.

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