Tuesday, 6 September 2016

Once upon a time.

Once upon a time there was two big bunny’s and they was a nice and friendly dinosaur and three men they were friends and shared the same house together they were loving creatures and humans they always shared their yum yum's together.

When they were sleeping something very strange happened. The strange thing was a gruffalo the humans and the creatures went outside together and they said what long claws you got, what big purple spikes you got and look how big teeth you got and look how big eyes you got. Then they started to scream as loud as they have ever screamed they were horrified from the scary creature but they didn't realised that it was actually nice just like them.

This is my favorite part. Do you want to know how they knew that the gruffalo was good they apologised to the gruffalo then the gruffalo became like family with the creatures and the humans.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Danielle your story is great maybe next time you can add a full stop weir you can't berth.Also make sure that it makes sence.Keep up the great work.