Thursday, 22 September 2016

In the holidays

In the holidays me my mum my sister and brother are going to cash converters for a new Xbox 4 for my brother cause the broke cause he punched it when he was angry.

After we did that we will be going to Pak’n’save it was a hot day that day oh and it was on Friday after school it will be an exceptional day because we saw a nice Maori women I don't know her name but my mum does she’s a pretty cool lady.

After that we will go to Panmure at the bike barn to buy a bike from and my sister it was pink and purple then we had something very yummy it was chicken nibbles it was are very gigantic day.


  1. Hi Danielle I love how you talked about your holidays it sounds fun. Make sure it makes sence and make sure you always try your best. Keep up the great work.

  2. Hi Danielle I love your wiriting.I like how you sayed where you are going to go and what day you are going.Make sure you try your best and Keep up the great work.